
Heart did it again
Totally eclipsed the brain
Went against head’s caution
Threw reason out the window
Kicked rationale out the door
Allowed herself to believe yet another lie
Really, was it another or just the same ol’ line
Brain saw it a mile away for what it really was
Red-flashing warnings of caution, ignored all of them she did
Headlong into heartbreak seeing only what she wanted
Believing a line as old as time
Love is truly truly blind
Now she’s once again shattered
Tiny pieces here and there
Causing lungs to work over time
Inhale.
Exhale.
Gasping.
Oops … heart did it again

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This piece is a riff off of Britney Spear’s popular song “Oops! I Did It Again” for a R&B-poetry collab.
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Good one, Dee! “The heart is deceitful above all things and beyond cure. Who can understand it?” (Jeremiah 17:9)
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Ain’t it?! The word can’t be wrong!!!
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Okay so this is a riff on Ms Brittany Spears yes?? Love it!
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Yesss you got it (you’re the only one …yippee for Lonia) Definitely a riff!!!!!
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…and THANKS!!!!!
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so well done Dee! Love your poem! 💖💖
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Thanks Cindy!! I enjoyed writing it!!!!!
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Oops!! The heart usually has a tender spot.
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Tender heart!!!!
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Sometimes we have to loosen our control over our hearts/emotions. In my language there’s a famous verse;
It’s good that mind guards the heart
But sometimes, let it go free.
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I like that saying very much. I wonder if the heart can even be guarded by logic?!
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Sometimes. It all depends on how you’ve trained it.
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I suppose so 👍🏽
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🙏🏼
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Hope it is a quick recovery! ❤
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You’re kind dear Eliza. It’s just a poem I wrote as the idea came to me. My heart and all body parts are in cahoots to keep me happy 😃
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