The First Warmth ©Dawn Minott

David and I put our creative minds together, and the end result was this rengay—a small meditation on thaw, on breath, on what returns to life:

DAVID

ice on orchid roots
melts tropical assumptions
~ drip offers comfort

DAWN

warmth hums through patience
sun summons light’s rays beaming

DAVID

window slightly cracked
a cautious fragrance wandering
nothing urging bloom

DAWN

except when soul cries
the joy of the human heart
springs forth abundance

DAVID

first cry of a newborn child
the world answers with warm hands

DAWN

frost returns as dew
tiny fingers curl and cling
It’s morning again

Afterword: A rengay is a short collaborative linked-verse poem which unfolds in six three- and two-line stanzas, with poets alternating sections. Each stanza connects to the one before it. It relies on suggestion, image, and restraint. By the final stanza, the poem subtly circles back to its beginning, creating a sense of return—two voices linked through attentive exchange.

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The interval, or: A rengay ©️Dawn Minott

A two-person ‘Rengay’ By Dawn and David. Check it out:

The interval, or: A rengay

Dawn
nature serenades
chirping birds, morning breezes
eyes flutter open

David
whiskers quiver in the air
fangs clack toward windowpane

Dawn
sunbeam on the sill
paw lifts, curiosity
stirs, reaching for light

David
hands unclench
bedside machines hum
lashes twitch

Dawn
curtains billowing softly
like a prayer on the wind

David
radio crackles
Bon Jovi drifts through static
song becomes the sky


Afterword: My first rengay!!! Thanks David for this beautiful collaboration! The co-creating process was flawless and flowed seamlessly—two minds working in synchronicity to create a single piece of art!!!!

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