

My love looks better on you
Like my favorite summer dress, fitted and true
You always smiled in pure delight
When I wore it on our many date nights
But the seasons, they changed way too fast
Autumn’s chill claimed you at last
Now the dress lies empty and cold
Haunting stories in the memory it holds
In the whispers of the evening breeze
I hear your laughter through the trees
The way you wore my love, so well
It echoes from where your spirit now dwells
Though you’re not here, your love remains
A soothing balm for all my pains
I see it in the stars above
For my love looks better on you, my love
In my dreams, you wear it still, I know
My love, like my dress, in memory flow
The memories of how your hand clung to mine
Feels like they’re escaping on wings to the Divine

My love looks better on you
Even now, in skies of blue
And when the night begins to fall
I’ll feel your presence through it all
Until we meet where time is none
And all that’s lost is once more won
I’ll hold this thought so pure and true:
My love was always better on you
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Nod to Alicia Keys’s song of the same title
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In creative solidarity, Dee
Love this gorgeous poem, Dawn…and hearing it read in your beautiful voice. God bless you!
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Thanks so much Lynn. Great to “see” you again.
Happy Friday 🎉🎊
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Lovely!
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Thanks much-o 😀 glad you enjoyed it 🙏🏽🎊🙏🏽
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My pleasure. 😊
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful talent with us, Dawn. 💗
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Thank you for stopping by and engaging. Appreciate you as always Michele 🙏🏽💕🙏🏽
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I agree with Ace; this is a masterpiece!🌺🩷
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Ahh Kymber deary, you warm my heart. Thank you so much 😊🙏🏽😊
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My pleasure. 🙂
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I love everything about this Queen Dawn. Your love looks good on me girlfriend. Your recitation is so seductive and reassuring! Until we meet…🥰💖😍 Hugs and smooches!
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Hey sistah gurl you’re the awesomeST!!!! Thanks for being you—a constant source of positivity and light!!!! Wouldn’t it nice to meet 🎉🎊🎉 Big hug. Nuff love. Happy weekend queen 💕❤️💕
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Thanks a million Queen Dawn my dear! I always appreciate your good vibes! Nuff love sistah girlfriend. 😍💖🥰 Have a FANtabulous weekend my dear! Cheers! 🥂🙆🏽♀️🍸
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Right back at ya deary!!! Cheers 🙏🏽🎊🙏🏽
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🥰💖😍
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Wow !!
Love your writing Dawn!
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Thanks deary 🎉💕🎉
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My pleasure Dawn 💕🤗💕
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💕😊💕
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👏🏼 Beautiful, Dawn!
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Hey Eliza!!!!! Much thanks-O 🎊🎉🎉🎊
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This is such a lovely poem Dawn. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Thanks dear Sadje!!!
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You’re most welcome
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💕🙏🏽💕
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😍😍😍
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Masterpiece once again!
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Thanks a million Ace. Really really appreciate this beautiful affirmation!!! 🙏🏽🎊🙏🏽
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