
War broke out in heaven—
Sin and hell introduced
Sin took its shot
A fruit bitten
Hell made its move
The world shifted
When she bit, then he bit—
All of creation groaned
Sorrow stepped in
Death rolled up
And the grave claimed its throne
But this story wasn’t over—
The script wasn’t sealed
To rewrite the ending,
Love itself took the field
A price too high for men to pay,
So love stepped forth and made a way
The cost? Astronomical!
The method? Unthinkable!
God offered the Lamb, without contemplation
The ultimate heist of redemption
Incognito birth—
In a barn, low on worth
Swaddled in cloth so tattered and torn
Who would have guessed, who could have known?
This babe so fragile, this child so very small
Would grow up to pull off the smoothest heist of them all
Stealth move after stealth move
The enemy never saw Him coming
First, He stole death’s grip
Then, He stole hell’s keys
He unraveled the chains—
And set humanity free
Next, He stole sin’s power,
Left it broken, undone
Ransomed for eternity—
He declared, “It is won!”
But He wasn’t done
For He stole condemnation
Snatched guilt and shame
Laid them at the altar, replaced with His name
Like a thief in the night, love came breaking in
Forgiveness for all, for every last sin
Jesus—
Love in motion, pure devotion
A rebel against a borrowed grave
No swords drawn, no war to wage
Just love unmatched, unshaken and true
A love so deep, it made all things new
He robbed the grave with surgical precision
Love was His weapon, mercy His mission
No force, no foe, could stand ‘gainst His plan
The Lamb became the Lion, redeeming every man
Death? Defeated!
Sin? Overruled!
Hell? Evicted!
Love broke all the rules!
Jesus—
Master of the smoothest heist on earth
Snatching victory from defeat, deliverance at His birth
Suffered a criminal’s death, changed the game
Eternal love, infinite grace—we’ll never be the same
The mastermind Savior, swift and wise
A thief of hearts with loving ties
Not stealing to break, but to make whole
To heal, to redeem, to reclaim every soul
His love was the heist,
His death, the greatest score
The cross was the setup
The grave—the open door
The plot twist? The comeback?
Oh, that shook the floor
‘Cause victory—it wasn’t stolen—
It was sealed forevermore
After-Word: I first started this poem in 2022, inspired by Michael Jackson’s Smooth Criminal. Back then, the working title was Smoothest Criminal—a bit risqué, but that’s where my creativity first landed. As the piece evolved, so did its meaning, and just last week, it finally reached completion. After testing the title with a few friends, it, too, transformed—becoming “Smoothest Heist”.
I’d love to hear your thoughts on this one!
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In creative solidarity, Dee
Wow! Epic poem, Dawn. ❤️👏🏻
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Hey Michele. Thanks a mil. Appreciate you 💕🌺💕
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Back at you! Thank you, beautiful poetess. 💕
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💕🌺💕
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Clever spin on the bible and faith Dawn.
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Hey Brad. Thanks much!! Happy weekend 🙏🏽🎊🙏🏽
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Thanks!
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Absolutely ace Dawn! Absolutely ace! It shares the gospel in a creative, accessible form and I just love how you have presented it. The subject matter (good news of the gospel) and Christ’s commission to all his followers, is something quite close to my heart these days. Every time there is a tragedy, all the killing around the world makes me think of people’s souls, where they will spend eternity, and my responsibility, and the role I should be playing in all this.
Thank you so much for sharing this. The Lord bless you and have a wonderful weekend 🙂
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Lovely to get your feedback. I feel the same sense of responsibility to share hope to a world bombarded by fear, hopelessness, despair. Thanks for stopping by. Appreciate your engaging too!!
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No problem Dawn 🙂
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🙏🏽🌺🙏🏽
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Incredible writing Dawn 👏👏
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Thanks so much. This may be one of the poems in draft the longest!!!!! Percolated for a long time then it all just came together from reflecting on the upheaval in the world in the past couple months!!!
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It is amazing Dawn.
Have a lovely weekend 💕🙏💕
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Thanks dear Maggie. You too 💕🌺💕
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Thank you Dawn 💕🤗💕
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