
I don’t want fireworks love—
fireworks shoot high,
a burst of color
against night sky,
then fade, drift,
turn into smoky grey streaks
falling fast
to the ground
I want a love that is steady,
like the tide
that kisses the shore,
then pulls away softly,
a rhythm
as ancient as time
I want a love that is steady,
like the old oak
in the backyard,
roots deep,
branches that sway
but never break,
sheltering us
through every storm
I want a love that is steady,
like a candle
in the window,
its light small
but unwavering,
guiding you to me
through the darkest nights
I want a love that is steady,
a melody played
over and over,
each note familiar,
each chord a comfort,
binding us
in an endless refrain
No fireworks,
no bursts of temporary glory—
just give me that quiet,
steady pulse
of a heart
that beats in time with mine,
day after day,
year after year,
until the end of forever
Yeah …
Give me that steady love

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How beautiful!
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Thanks Bella 🤗🎉🤗
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Wow! Beautifully written. I felt that. I crave a steady love and affection from my husband. Nowadays, it feels though we are roommates. I think we fight more than we love.
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So sorry to hear that. Hope things turn around fue you both.
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Thank you. Same here.
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👏🏼 👍🏼 💕
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❤️🙏🏽❤️
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That second stanza! 💞 Beautiful poem and reading, Dawn.
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Thanks deary!!!!! I’m in love with love ❤️ I’m writing about my muse ❤️
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A beautiful idea of steady and steadfast love
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Absolutely-tutely Sadje!!!!!
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Another powerful depiction of real love versus puppy love. God’s love is certainly reflected in this illustration and we can see how it pales on comparison to the other alternative.
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