Edge of Paradise ©Dawn Minott |an Etheree

On By Dawn MinottIn Poetry

Us—
Me, you
Paradise
Basking in love
Hearts as one connecting
Standstill in moments cherished
As setting sun frozen in time
Strolling on the edge of paradise
Holding hands the way lovers often do

Holding hands the way lovers often do
Strolling on the edge of paradise
As setting sun frozen in time
Standstill in moments cherished
Hearts as one connecting
Basking in love
Paradise
Me, you—
Us

Afterword: The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.

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23 thoughts on “Edge of Paradise ©Dawn Minott |an Etheree”

  5. Oh my sistah Dawn. I love the way you mirrored the elements that bring the hope of a paradise so loving and beautiful together. This is a tantalizing etheree my dear. Now, that’s what love’s gotta do with it! 🥰💖😍 Hugs and smooches.

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