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This piece of mint upon my tongue,
Cool and sharp, a memory clung.
Refreshing tea, from pot, flow like song
A feeling I had forgotten for far too long
Steam curls upward, time bends in its sway,
Suddenly I’m taken back to Montego Bay.
Rain ra-ta-tat on grandma’s kitchen zinc roof
Her voice is a calm to thunder—a lullaby, my living truth.
“Endure the storm, my child, you’ll find your way—
After the darkest nights, there’ll come brighter days.”
While mint’s fragrance floats effortlessly,
A healing balm for all that ails me.
Now, in this city—a jungle of concrete
Where busyness masks life, blanketed in conceit
The mint revives me—channeling memories of choice,
Like grandma’s kitchen and her soothing voice.
And when the world around me feels heavy, unkind,
That taste of mint reminds me what I must find:
Strength that lingers, roots that last,
A living hope connecting future and past.
Afterword: This piece written for Spillwords prompt: to create a piece where a character experiences a vivid, forgotten memory triggered by a specific flavor (e.g., burnt sugar, sour lemons, or something unusual). Weave the memory into their present-day conflict.
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Thanks dear Maggie!!!
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My pleasure always Dawn
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Nicely penned!
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Wonderful poem, Dawn. Love it. 💕
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Lovely verse and musings on our city lives Dawn.
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Indeed indeed Brad!!
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Great imagery to jig the senses! Thanks for sharing!
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Yes that’s the power of memory 😀🙏🏽😀and as we know, they don’t leave like people do!!
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Lovely poem Dawn. Very evocative.
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You’ve met the Spillwords challenge very nicely.
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Thanks much Anneli!!! Cheers. 🙂🙏🏽🙂
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