Beforeword: Over a decade ago, I embarked on what I considered my ancestral return journey to Africa, specifically Ghana. The instant my feet touched the Ghanaian soil, I instinctively knew I was home. This poem captures that profound body-to-heart alignment. A similar alignment occurred when I later lived in Nigeria, where I was given the name Omowale, meaning “the child has returned home.”

There is no feeling like this:
your body finally arrives
in a place your heart already knows.
A distant land, a hidden corner,
a whisper in the air,
a fragrance remembered from dreams,
all suddenly real, palpable.
Feet touch ground, soft and firm,
hands reach out, trembling, steady.
The air tastes familiar,
each breath a reunion with memory.
Eyes meet landscapes once seen
through the lens of longing,
now sharp, clear,
alive with presence.
Your heart’s echo calls,
a song long unsung,
now resounding in the rhythm
of footsteps, of heartbeats.
Here, the soul unwinds its threads,
each fiber of your being
intertwines with the essence
of this longed-for place.
No longer split between longing and being,
you stand whole,
every part of you here, now,
settled into the embrace of arrival.
There is no feeling like this:
a homecoming, a soul’s return,
where the body follows the heart
into the heart’s true domain.

I first shared this as a poetic collaboration with David from The Skeptics Kaddish, who responded with a Sijo available at this link.
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Thanks muchly😉
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Nice 👌🏻
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Thanks much. Cheers 😀
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Oh my gosh Queen Omowale, what a powerful reflection about visiting the Motherland, 🌍 and I had no idea about the ‘Door of No Return.” So moving and truly poignant. 🙏🏼 I can understand the depth of your transfixation. I would be too, especially since one of the destination points was in my hometown of Charleston, SC. This post truly tugged at my heartstrings sistah friend. 🤗💖😊
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Hey sistah queen. I’ve visited 3 castles formerly used to house Africans before they were shipped into slavery and being in those rooms, it’s palpable. On the day the pic was taken was the last part of the tour which is standing in that door of no return and for me what I felt in my core can only be described as ancestral connection. Heartstring tugging for sure!!!! Thanks for sharing especially re SC. A long painful connected history of people of African descent across the diaspora.
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Strength and endurance Queen Dawn. Without it, we wouldn’t be here today! Keep pressing on sistah girlfriend! 🥰🙌🏼😘 Much love! 💖
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Yes girl. We must. We weren’t built to beak (channeling missWhitney) 💕💗💕💗
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Drop the mic! 🎤🎤🎤 Church is out and the congregation is not returning! 😲👍🏼🤭 Oh no you didn’t channel Whitney! 🎶 But that was indeed one song I wish got more play time!
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Yes I did 😊. Her voice is missed in this world. Happy Sunday misseyKym 🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉
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Thanks so much sistah Queen. Have a FANtabulous week my dear! Cheers! 💐🥂🎉
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Right back at ya!!!!! 🤗💕💗💕🤗
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I enjoyed this heartfelt poetry Dawn.
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So glad you did my friend!!!! Big hug 🤗
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beautiful and deeply touching, Dawn 🤍
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Thanks so much Destiny!!!
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Deeply moved by your poem. Thank you, Dawn. Overwhelming emotion as I read, having experienced similar feelings when visiting Ireland. 💕
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Hi Michele. It makes all the difference when you read a piece that resonates personally. Thanks for sharing your personal connection to the essence of the poem.
Have a good week ahead.
Cheers my friend
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Thank you for your lovely understanding of my reaction to your poem and cheers to you kind friend. 🌺
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Most def dearest!!!!!! I really appreciate your empathy. Cheers to a great week ahead 🎉💕🎉
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My favorite lines, “a song long unsung,
now resounding in the rhythm”
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Thank you Mary. Music has often been my muse. I’ve written a couple poems i referred to as “R&B collab” along that same vein. Happy that’s the line that stood out for you in this piece.
Cheers to a great week ahead 🙏🏽🎊🙏🏽
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I am so honored that you shared your very personal piece with me, Dawn, and I really appreciate gaining more insight into where you were coming from!
Much love,
David
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Thank you David!!! Many of my pieces come from experiences often my own but also of others as expressed to me. This is important because I write from what I feel. If I don’t/cant feel it I can’t write it. Enjoyed doing this as a collab with you and to get your take on the piece. Independent of knowing the backstory your responding Sijo was spot on!!!
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BTW, where how many generations ago was your family from those countries?
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Slavery lasted almost 250 years. It’s been 405 years since slavery was officially abolished. The 400th year was marked by Ghana as the year of return. Many from the Diaspora returned to mark the occasion.
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So, are your ancestors specifically from Ghana? Did other countries in Africa mark the year of return too? (is it okay that I’m asking? I’m very curious!)
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Hi David. It’s definitely ok. I appreciate your interest in my history. Jamaicans came mostly from modern day Ghana, Nigeria and Central Africa.
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thank you so much for educating me – I had no idea! I know pretty much nothing about your people’s history.
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It’s understandable.
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Kudos on finding your home and feeling whole Dawn. I haven’t found my home.
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Thanks Brad. I can truly say that was one of the most defining moments of my life.
Home can also be a person or the place you feel safest. I pray you’ll find your home.
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Thanks Dawn. I’ve felt it years ago in Boulder and with a few people, but nothing lately.
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I pray you find it again Brad. We all need that. Cheers 🎊🙏🏽🎊
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Thanks Maggie!
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My pleasure Dawn
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DNA and the soul knows home. 🙏🏼 💖
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Absolutely! Eliza!!! Ancestry stored in DNA!!!!
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