
A two-person ‘Rengay’ By Dawn and David. Check it out:
The interval, or: A rengay
Dawn
nature serenades
chirping birds, morning breezes
eyes flutter open
David
whiskers quiver in the air
fangs clack toward windowpane
Dawn
sunbeam on the sill
paw lifts, curiosity
stirs, reaching for light
David
hands unclench
bedside machines hum
lashes twitch
Dawn
curtains billowing softly
like a prayer on the wind
David
radio crackles
Bon Jovi drifts through static
song becomes the sky
Afterword: My first rengay!!! Thanks David for this beautiful collaboration! The co-creating process was flawless and flowed seamlessly—two minds working in synchronicity to create a single piece of art!!!!
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In creative solidarity, Dee
*hug!*
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🤗
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That must have been fun to write.
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It was. David walked me through it. It was a learning while doing experience 🙂
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Fun collaboration Dawn.
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It truly was, Brad!!! Thanks for stopping by. 🎉🙏🏽🎉
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Nice! 👏🏼 👍🏼
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Thanks dear Eliza!!! 💖🙏🏽💖
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Wonderful collab 👏🤗👏
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It most certainly was 🙂💕🙂 happy weekend Maggie!!!
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Happy Weekend Dawn 🥰❤️🥰
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Thanks!!!😊
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Interesting. I loved the flow; the imagery. Very creative, warming!
Norma.
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Hey Norms. Thanks my friend. 🙏🏽💕🙏🏽
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❤️❤️
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Hey hot goddess!! Long time no see, queen. Hope your heart is healing ❤️🩹
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What a wonderful poem you two created! 💗
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Yes indeed Cindy. David is a great collaborator 🙏🏽🙂🙏🏽
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Beautiful
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Thanks dear Sadje!!! Happy weekend my friend 💕💖💕
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You’re very welcome ♥️♥️♥️
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