October 28, 2025, Melissa roll een—
category 5
a true Goliath, full a noise an’ might
breeze a tear dun tree
sea a climb ova hill
she come wid a hundred-eighty-five mile a hour win’
pressure low like she mean fi mash up everyting
But she never know bout Jah-mek-yah
dat Ja-mai-ca is more dan a place pan a map
it’s a pulse, a community, a people weh she couldn’t stop
an when she roar
she wake up all a wi worldwide
from Bronx to London tide
She never know wi bigga dan har storm—
dat when wi unite, wi turn grief inna form
an’ show di worl’ weh it really mean
to be JamaiCAN
Wi aguh pick up di piece dem—
bit by bit, brick by brick
fram yard to lane, from mountain to sea
Melissa wake up all a we
an’ we aguh move togedda like one family
From di likkle one dem a sweep di yard
to di elder a patch roof wid nail an’ hamma
every han’ pon deck
every heart a beat—
yeh man, wi still deh yah
Di breeze try fi ben’ wi
di rain nuh try fi drown wi
but wi—wi aguh build back betta from storm an’ rain
wi aguh sing again louda dan di soun’ a pain
but
resilience nuh mean we fi walk alone
so sah
even di mightiest tree
need support jus’ like we
So yeh, wi proud—
but pride cyan pour concrete
Yeh, wi strong—
but strent still need sleep fe keep
Even tallawah need a han’ fi lif’ when troubles come heavy an’ penetrate deep
Wi likkle—but wi tallawah
Wi batta—but wi beautiful still
Wi shaken—but wi nuh bruk
Wi hurt—but wi a guh ‘eal
Fram Black River to deep inna St. James Parish
wi aguh rise again like mawnin’ sun pan Blue Mountain hill, we cherish
wi not jus’ survivin’, but wi revivin’—
wid one heart, one love, one will
So when di worl’ look pon wi
mek we tell dem clear an’ true
fram de diaspora to de yawd crew
T’ough we batta an’ bruise
We are JamaiCAN—
so we CAN rise again
Stronga. Betta. Jamaica!💚🖤💛

Afterword: Why I Write in Patois
I was intentional in using patois to write this tribute poem because some pain refuses translation. The pain of watching the land that shaped you being whipped out of shape by forces beyond human control can’t live comfortably in borrowed language. It has to be spoken in the tongue that raised you, the voice that knows your cadence, your memory, your silence.
Patois understands my inner being. It carries the weight, the humor, the ache, the defiance. It translates not just what happened, but how it felt. It connects me to every other Jamaican—whether in the diaspora or at home—as we collectively felt the trauma inflicted on our homeland and our people. When I speak in patois, I am not performing culture — I am returning home. To my people. To my roots. To the land that made me.
Some grief is only fluent in the language of home.
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A beautiful tribute, Dawn. My thoughts are with the people of Jamaica.
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Thank you so much Natalie!!! Every positive vibe count 🙏🏽💕🙏🏽
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Glad you made it through the initial storm, Dawn. Prayers for you and all the people of Jamaica!
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I wasn’t physically there Lynn but high emotional toll from seeing the devastation and being so far away, feeling helpless.
Thanks for caring 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
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What a beautiful video and message Dawn. And I enjoy your Jamaican accent jah.
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It’s been an emotional rollercoaster Brad. Been hard to write except in tribute to my homeland 🇯🇲 thanks for stopping by 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
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Dee, thank you for reciting this piece/writing it in your Mother Tongue (Jamaican Patois, yes?). A close and dear friend of mine is Jamaican, and I love when he cuts to Patois and then back to English so effortlessly. It gives me chills.
This poem did the same. The video accompanying it is a fine tool, too. Peace and blessings, Dee. Peace and blessings.
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There are times when things can only be said in one’s mother tongue. This is one of those times.
Yes, you got it right—patois. Thanks for caring trE!!
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You’re most welcome.
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Yes, we are JamaiCan; We will rise again…. Betta an straga.
Thanks for the inspiration Dawn. You never disappoint. ❤️
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Yes we CAN!!! And we will!!!
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👍🏼 🙏🏼 🇯🇲 😎
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🙏🏽🙏🏽‼️🙏🏽🙏🏽
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Thinking of you my friend 🙏💖
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Thanks dear Maggie 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽 appreciate you!!
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Dawn 🙏 take good care 🙏
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Yes 🙌🏾 🙌🏾 yes 🙌🏾 🙌🏾 thanks dear 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
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Dawn 💕🙏💕🙏💕🙏
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A beautiful tribute Dawn.
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🙏🏽🙏🏽💖🙏🏽🙏🏽
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